X Wasting My Time On You X Poem by Lisa Anderson

X Wasting My Time On You X

Rating: 4.5


I know in wasting my time on you
One day you speak to me
The next it is like you don’t even know me
When your alone you speak to me
When you’re with people you blank me
One second you’re with me
The next you speaking about me
When you need help
You know I help you
I let you in my house
When you have been kicked out
If you’re in a fight
Ill jump in or stop it
You come running to me
When no one is aloud out
The thing is you have fallen plenty of times
And I have caught you
But i thought ill just warn you
Because of what you have put me through
If you fall one more time
I will not catch you
I will let you fall
And I will not care
How much it hurts you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Robertson 03 December 2008

this is touching and yet it makes me feel insulted haha ^^ keep up the good work and try to prevent the idea of *different* poetry please

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Fiona Davidson 29 November 2008

Time is too precious to waste on this person Lisa...close the door and move on...well written piece...thank you

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Sid John Gardner. 29 November 2008

The person who is writing this should stop, and take time to evaluate the situation.Write down points positive and negative.If the negatives outweigh the positives...Either continue to be used as a doormat OR...Start dating a guy bigger and smarter than him and start enjoying life.If new love is involved you have a bonus...Advice only in the event of this writing being anything other than pure fiction of course. Sid xx

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Frances Warwick 29 November 2008

Oh Lisa...Don, t ever be taken for granted, I know how it feels...Thankyou for sharing this x

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