Yellow Moon Poem by James Catt

Yellow Moon

Rating: 4.3


" there are somethings that can't be helped."
I said.

"I know '' she said

She faced the window, her back was tense with an anger
she couldn't face

The moon was a yellow fish hook in the sky.

I felt somehow justified
to myself,
It was all so tangible, so real,
The window, the yellow moon.

An unspoken anger
casts an inky shadow over me.

My mind does a sudden leap,
folds in on its self.

I am alone with the moon.

Thursday, December 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2017

A very beautiful poem with elegant poetic expression.. I liked it...10

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, James Catt. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Savita Tyagi 07 December 2017

The ill fated moment was reversed, anger never matured. All because attention was reverted to yellow moon. A very contemporary poem in its style of emotional display. Thanks for sharing.

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