Monday, October 22, 2018

Yet Lived A Corpse Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have been strong for far too long.
I have grown sick of feeling wrong.
The words stuck on the tip of my tongue.
They are not new, they have once been sung.
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Farook Ajose
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 February 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Farook. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 07 November 2018

It is a good poem..........I like this........

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Susan Williams 06 November 2018

The closing lines were what every poet strives for- heartfelt, memorable, and important. Thank you for sharing this- -very well done throughout

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Chinedu Dike 25 October 2018

Well conceived and elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing Farook.

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