divya gaur

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You - Poem by divya gaur

Its a new day,
im falling for you,
and for the first time it feels true.
and somewhere,
is the lovely place place,
that i've been dreaming with you.

so, come along
hold me strong
we can fly away...
baby, we can fly away..

you've got a way,
when u take my hand
i can feel the love that we share.
to be contd.

Comments about You by divya gaur

  • Jazib Kamalvi (12/3/2017 2:01:00 AM)

    A sublime start with a nice poem, Divya g. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/25/2011 12:53:00 AM)

    thank u so much people... :) (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2011 9:51:00 AM)

    This is really fantastic if poetry is something new for you. I must say that it would make a very nice song as it is perfect to be lyrics for a song. Being a lyricist that's how i felt after going through this beautiful poem of yours. But i wonder why it's yet to be continued.. Carry on the good work. Take care. (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2011 3:19:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/6/2011 2:53:00 AM)

    you've got a way,
    when u take my hand
    i can feel the love that we share.... nicely expressed.. good one...10
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 6, 2011

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