You Poem by divya gaur
You
Its a new day,
im falling for you,
and for the first time it feels true.
and somewhere,
is the lovely place place,
that i've been dreaming with you.
so, come along
hold me strong
we can fly away...
baby, we can fly away..
you've got a way,
when u take my hand
i can feel the love that we share.
to be contd.
This is really fantastic if poetry is something new for you. I must say that it would make a very nice song as it is perfect to be lyrics for a song. Being a lyricist that's how i felt after going through this beautiful poem of yours. But i wonder why it's yet to be continued.. Carry on the good work. Take care.
Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
you've got a way, when u take my hand i can feel the love that we share.... nicely expressed.. good one...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A sublime start with a nice poem, Divya g. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.