Connie Yost

Rookie - 21 Points (5/27/38 / Reed City, Michigan)

You - Poem by Connie Yost


I just want to feel your thoughts around me,
I just want to wrap you up in mine.
I'm so glad your words reached out and found me,
I hope I haven't crossed the poet's line.

Comments about You by Connie Yost

  • Khairul Ahsan (3/22/2014 10:04:00 AM)

    What a wonderful poem it is!
    Lucid, yet enigmatic. A perfect poem.10/10.
    'I hope I haven't crossed the poet's line.' - Beautifully said!
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  • Charles Jagongo Ogola (2/27/2014 10:21:00 AM)

    This is beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2014 9:09:00 PM)

    the third line is too dramatic and effective..thank you for sharing this poem.. (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2014 4:47:00 PM)

    The poem is short and sweet, of love found again. The only thing that niggles is the meaning of the third line. Somehow it does not have a clear meaning. The person who searches will find.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 27, 2014

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