Lust

Very bold attempt and reminds me of Kamala Das. I wish our poetesses to be as free like their male counterparts to express the desires and passions. Keep focussing on this aspect in future works also.

Great! It says all things you think in that moment of passion that some are too ashamed to say out loud

Finally. *A man hears what he wants to hear and he disregards the rest*. In this case, you actually said what I wanted to hear.

very nuice.. happy new yaer

Yeah well it all starts from being attracted to what we see. Soul-mate? Nah we are no witches to see souls.: D

Such I trust is a must.

The sensuality expressed in the poem can be felt by all, but not as explicitly expressed as the poetess has done. Love is consummated by physical love making. without love is.

For I am a woman LOve and , hand in hand. temptating poem. you are great, Aparna

True... can't be separated from Love... It's the physical attraction that spills the beans of togetherness and love could be a byproduct of Man woman relationship... Quite openly and unadulterated expression...

The poem is a bold confession that it's that is the cause of love between a man and a woman. All other forms of love are nothing but our ego. My father, my mother, my children, my town, my nation, everywhere it is ego.