Lust - Poem by Aparna Chatterjee

must find its way. (Report)Reply

The poem is a bold confession that it's that is the cause of love between a man and a woman. All other forms of love are nothing but our ego. My father, my mother, my children, my town, my nation, everywhere it is ego. (Report)Reply

Show me your Body
inside out…
no clothes on,
no holds barred…
bit by bit,
part by part,
give me your smells,
and your sweat…
give me what all you have
every naked bit of yours,
I want to see All of yours.

great write
great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

is beautiful...only with awareness...thanks (Report)Reply

The creator of this poem unveils her thought about the relation of a woman with a man. She is bold enough to say that love and go hand in hand. (Report)Reply

I ike this a lot...It picks uo the essence between me and my newest love, , Harold (Report)Reply

A poem that pours out the essence of being as a woman and man making love. A powerful write. (Report)Reply

Good One. Poet is asking for. Expressions are great. (Report)Reply

Hal Faust(9/26/2018 1:33:00 AM)

Great poem...

I hope you like (Report)Reply

As a poetry a fine piece of artTh..honest and very bold try...I even praise the verse...but some how feel that something is wrong... there is something I do not agree with....because love and are two different things...Sorry to say this...But I will try to explain my point in different way...anyway Thanks for sharing your emotions through poetry (Report)Reply

prudishness culminates in violence, domestic violence. More free the talk on man-woman relation more is the chance for peace and progress because man does not find an opportunity to get suddenly judgemental hard way.
Free talk also help body to secret life supportive liquid in the body enhancing longevity (subject to scientific
ratification) .Let us talk more freely.Welldone.beautiful poem. (Report)Reply

Hi Aparna,

Beautiful poem..Just enough sensuality to define lust. Never crossed the borders.

How can I love you
and not lust you?

And,

For Me,
Love and Lust,
go hand in hand…
for I am a Woman
and you are my Man

Well done... All the best... (Report)Reply

wow....lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

This one is one of the best poem about lust, nicely described, Well done Aparna- thevigilante09@gmail.com (Report)Reply

You speak the language of lust, yet it is pure because each reader carries away his or her own lust. The subject matter is sizzling, but the expression is something to contemplate. (Report)Reply

A display of the bitter truth behind a man's and a woman's shy self.Though they drape themselves with pretence, your poem brings out the real humans' love. (Report)Reply

Wow...A beautiful poem with all raw emotions embedded.
Show me your Body
inside out…
no clothes on,
no holds barred…
bit by bit,
part by part,
give me your smells,
and your sweat…
give me what all you have
every naked bit of yours,
I want to see All of yours.

I love your frank expression about the feelings of a woman in this stanza.

If Lust be sin,
So be it…
For I am a Woman,
And you a Man.
How can I love you
and not lust you?

The best lines are

For Me,
Love and Lust,
go hand in hand…
for I am a Woman
and you are my Man.
Thank you poetess for the poem.
It deserves a perfect 10. (Report)Reply

Love it (Report)Reply

You have portrayed man and woman as true as the nature has created them. The elements of love and lust provide the necessary fire and purpose to to every human life. Great poetry. (Report)Reply

A very clear unbiased statement about lust, very true.
Love and Lust,
go hand in hand… (Report)Reply