I try so hard
To change…
My destiny.
Destiny,
You should also
Help me…
By changing
Yourself
For me.
I love the way this poem rings, may you snap your own destiny, very unique wording, I love it! ! !
A wonderful poem... appreciated the way you have addressed your stance!
Great. This is how we need to address our life. We should not stay "resigned as to fate."
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful piece! Most of yours are.