You Poem by Shuzumi Chan

You

Rating: 3.8


There’s much love of you

That i ever see

But do you know I’m in blue?

Coz you’re too fancy to me


I want to hug you tight

But one i stand just held my head high

Fall in the deepest sorrow

And nothing i can follow


There’s another love another time

Said you’ve found something worthy

You never be mine

That makes me so slightly

Friday, June 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about a man that i loved but unfortunately, i found him has a girlfriend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 June 2015

Love is a spiritual experience, it's whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. It's an emotion that comes naturally to us, it cannot be influenced unduly. A lovely poem nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Misnia Bahri Awaludin 21 June 2015

Lovely poem and meaningful hope you read my poem cheers

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Kelly Kurt 19 June 2015

This happens often. Thanks for sharing, Shuzumi

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Tahil Mirza 19 June 2015

Nice poem!!!Great use of words...n true emotions pouring out through this...

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