Wednesday, November 10, 2004

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Your eyes,
that once held my loving gaze.
You arms,
that once held me so tightly.
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Chrissy Robinson
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Jerry Hughes 14 July 2005

a bitter-sweet poem Chrissy. You love deeply, and hurt deeply when it doesn't 'happen' any more. That is part of growing up and learning to discern. However, it doesn't help to be too introspective, as one tends to cloud judgement, especially when writing. You're almost there so, write from the heart, but edit from the head. Good luck and best wishes, Jerry Hughes

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