You Poem by Deepti Agarwal

You

Rating: 5.0


The smile I wear
thinking about you...

The sensation I feel
dreaming about you..

The warmth I embrace
holding you close..

The tingling that runs
down my spine..

The various emotions
I travel through..

The strength I receive
in knowledge of you around..

The meaning I now
get out of my life..

It's all coz
am your wife!

~2008~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 28 January 2009

brief and meaningful..well expressed passion...10

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Chitra - 22 January 2009

a nice write! simple but sweet

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 January 2009

lovely...warmth needed to nurture a family..great read

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

'get out of my life', , , i would not mind wives telling this to husbands, , welll penned

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