You and I –
In this astounding
Blaze
We’ll take
Each others hand
And paint our love
In a pallid wall
You and I –
In this enchanting
Flight
We’ll soar high
In unison
Taking parallel lines
As direction
You and I –
In this baffling
Fate
We’ll unravel the riddle
Like allies
And let destiny seize us
To wherever we ought to be
You and I –
In this stiff
Mountain of Everest
We’ll climb the icy terrain
In the vein of an expert
And be on the summit
To have our liberty
You and I -
Is there really you and I?
Made for us in veracity
Or we still have to wait
In eternity?
‘Coz in your eyes I can see
Your dreams of you and me
No way to run
No where to hide
For you have captured my heart
In this vindictive life of mine
I only have one problem with this poem....after i read it once i need to read it another 5 times because i love the imagery and feeling you put in it. I can feel the words charged with emotion. Really nice job...you Catherine get a 10
‘And let destiny seize us..’ Fantastic line Ten+ dr. sakti
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ooooohhhh...I like this Catherine, very rich in emotion.. and I loved this.. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' No way to run No where to hide For you have captured my heart In this vindictive life of mine...................spot on, true and raw talent *10* Stacks of dirty dishes Jon