You And I, Not Land And Sky.. Comments

You and I, the patient land and the running water, You are full of love, just for me to admire you. I like these two lines to read together... 'Tis an excellent poem! ! ! !

I like the metaphoric play, here, Vee...The work is not a one-read poem...One must dig deep to grasp a message of passion that threads through a network of simile....Anf that is what makes for a good poem...Kudos! ~ FjR~

A beautiful melody with a message delivered very gently. Thank you Veeraiyah

Proud to hold me in two third of you I like this one, keep your uniqueness -Stevens Cadet