You Are Done Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

You Are Done

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Thoughts are never erratic
Only they can not remain static
They can invade any time of their choice
You catch them by wings and turn into tune or voice

You can not make them stay
More you hold far they go away
Once in mind you are completely gone
Seize them in time and you are done

It makes you absent minded
Loss of concentration and feel offended
Not a word may be liked if spoken loudly
Your curt reply may be counted as spoken proudly

I try to become naughty and make it live
Get no one with me but still prefer long drive
It is just to divert the mind from real worry
Just a precaution not to feel any sorry

The mind can not be left idle
It can not have any position in middle
It has to be either side of thing
You must opt for definite and something

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenny Gordon 01 April 2011

The title is fascinating, for it is difficult to ascertain how much it applies to the following discussion. Frankly, I disagree. Thoughts are not always reasonable and definitely may well be erratic. Going out for a drive to clear the thoughts is sensible. And it's an good point that certain thoughts may well make one absent-minded, resulting in curt replies. An interesting little monologue.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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