Let me come to you, freely
Sharing what is most precious.
Let’s not put labels, on what we share
So excluding, the beauty waiting to unfold
Don’t brand me, as taken
I am not yours to keep, nor are you!
Let freedom be our gift to each other
United by a chord, that’s stronger than social bonds
Yes, our hearts and minds shall tango
Seeking a delicious balance
Fluidly moving, with joy and freedom
From being hostage to, you are mine!
I love the soft alliteration and pure assonance of those first four lines, and the change of tone which comes after that, more than once. The seductiveness of ‘delicious balance’ followed by such a balanced line is terrific- and then that strong ending. Thank you
An incredible poem that is “deliciously balanced.” The ‘you” in this poem is the envy of all men.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love without the chains that bind, good luck walking that very fine line, , Andrew 10