You Are My Desire Comments

‘I long that You will be near and always nearer.’ Excellent …total ‘fine-in-tuned ‘ state…rhapsodic… congrats for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

penetrating deep in one`s mind and soul. a special poem!

You are the only One that can complete my soul. Let my words be pleasing, please come and make me whole. u always impress me, good luck

very nice very ewwell written

Truth is, he is there with everyone. Only we should open ourselves.

For your age my dear young friend, you write the Poetry and Prose of a Wise Old Man. You can be proud of all you write and I shall share this with another 'Friend' I give you +10 with an easy mind. Kind Regards. Philip

Read 'Psalm 91' several times

although im not religious, your poem really describes the feeling (: simply beautiful