You Are Weak, I Am Strong Poem by jasmin bell

You Are Weak, I Am Strong

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It doesn't matter anymore,
it doesn't matter that you made me so sore,
you are long gone now,
it actually makes me kind of proud,
to know that i made it so your not around.
I am my own person,
you are weak, i am strong,
us together was just so wrong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Unanue 16 December 2009

Many people should be jealous. You fit what most would take many stanzas to do in to one. And therein lies your real talent. Simplicity, simplicity, simplicity. And also, its beautifully sad and hopefull at the same time. Kewl.

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James Mclain 15 December 2009

lock your windows... i heard there is an escapee about tonight...iip

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dang... talent! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! good poem

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