You As Andromeda, Myself Nearby Poem by Daniel Brick

You As Andromeda, Myself Nearby



How about Andromeda? Would you
be willing to do a stint as the Princess
of a distant Kingdom, rough, untamed,
but magical in the gorgeous array of its Court?
Expect to be breathless after your first
rehearsal: the role will take you
to the center of your identity as a woman,
every possible encounter between you
and the world will occur. You will be
the obedient daughter of her parents' need;
you will be the gracious friend, alternately
blessed and cursed by your inevitable beauty;
your goodness will be celebrated, but it will
summon forth a monster of surpassing vulgarity
and you will find in your psyche an excess of
strength to halt its course of evil. But -
that Victory will require The Other, for whom
you will not realize until his breath touches
your cheek you are longing... After you,
dear Princess, this man, who may have once been
a god, is the best the world can offer.
On long winter nights, he will make you laugh
in the warmth of his company, and on summer nights,
he will spread the spell of the fabled Green Man
over all who linger in the perfumed air.

This is all MYTH. It is the deepest truth we can grasp
in our brief lives. You must understand by now,
the time of rehearsals has given way to the time of
these encounters. This is no test, it is Fate, your Fate
but also the world's Fate. Some encounters occur as the sun
arches over you and animates every cell of your body,
every joy in your heart, every good deed of your spirit.
Others will occur in the night world of Shadows
in your sleep. Realities and Dreams will be continually
exchanging places in the drama of this life
you have assumed. I am always nearby, your witness
and your guardian. My joy expands in your service.

Monday, August 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: myth,personality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The movement of this poem is its essence. It moves from a stage world of playing a role, assuming a part in a drama to a virtual world of the dual realities of the sensory world in which we have our existence and the psychic world in which we have our being. This is a poetic grasp of human life which means it is metaphorical rather than ontological.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 02 August 2016

What a wonderful description of a Princess Andromeda! While reading I had an envious selfish dream to suit the role! as for virtual - I'm afraid a little about this duality. Afraid about lie, But we love all our past heros virtually.

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Pamela Sinicrope 01 August 2016

Beautifully written. This is the first poem I have ever read with an author's note to include the word 'ontology.' :) I've always read it when reading texts on the philosophy of science and in qualitative research....with a focus on ontology (what things are) and epistemology (the way we know things) . I love how you separated out the parts of the human being into different metaphors. Very creative and crafty! Love the reference to Andromeda and your appreciation of female characters in your writing. Also interesting is how you convey much of this through the observant, conversant speaker. I want to understand more about who the speaker is. Interesting how you take this story and relate it to not only the woman in the poem and Andromeda (in the first stanza) , but really to all of us (in the second) . My joy expands in your service? Who is he? Interesting!

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