You Be The Jury Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

You Be The Jury

Rating: 4.8


Break opening hard layers
Digging deep enough in to earth
Planted, nourished and cared well
Fruit trees, to grow and yield fruits

They filled the garden with green ‘n pride
Pleasing eyes heart ‘n mind alike
Healthy and luscious, they came up
with blessings of drops from heavens up

They covered, though the views, behind
Yet, keeping environ clean and pleasant
Supported clothe lines too, of ours
fed inhabitants' souls, hearts and minds

On leaves was food, caterpillars found
Bees foraged on seasonal blossoms
Squirrels ‘n birds enjoyed fruiting times
Shrieking bats kept ours teeth grinding

Pests though, reigned the top, various bugs
On trunk grew fungi, lichens and mosses
Smiling blossomed twigs atop, lifted hopes
Fruits they bore, shared value with neighbors

Yet, falling leaves, twigs, flowers ‘n fruits,
Irritable trash on neighbor's compounds
Failed setting off for values they dispatched
Peevishly remarks, were, constantly heard

Being agonized for near two decades
on bad side of trees, I cared less
Dare not I challenge, but bear the loss
be it the end, and they win, I confess.

You Be The Jury
Saturday, May 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: living,society
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A real life experience.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Be it the end, and they win! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 June 2016

I confess and they win. Being in mood of challenge signifies definite attitudes remarked and constantly heard. This is very interesting sharing....10

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2016

An amazing, allegorical poem

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Thanks Kelly. Even from your few worded comments, I learn something.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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