You Better Fix This Wound Before I Pack Up And Go Comments

WELL SAID, I LOVED YOUR POEM! VICKY

i like it... raw and young and no apologies for expectations... i find myself apologizing for expectations... but i also see there was so much more that wasn't said

I hope all works well in your soul so the infection does capture every cell in your being then, then no hope left a glimmer now the touch possible if this poem does what its supposed to do

found this in my guiter case, wrote it about ten years ago............

Love from a man's point of view, very clearly stated in this force to be reckoned with poem David. I think there is a 'to' in there that should be 'too' Nice work. 9 from Tai