DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

You Better Fix This Wound Before I Pack Up And Go - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

I need you to love me,
when im feeling slow.
I need you to hold me,
when it gets to cold.
I need you to listen,
and brake my fall.
YOU better clean this
wound, before i pack up
and go.
I need you to touch me,
with your body and words,
I need you to say, our
love is stronger, then
this cold, cold blow.
YOU better clean this
wound, before i pack up
and go.


Comments about You Better Fix This Wound Before I Pack Up And Go by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (3/25/2007 11:34:00 AM)


    WELL SAID, I LOVED YOUR POEM!

    VICKY
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  • (2/20/2006 11:49:00 PM)


    i like it... raw and young and no apologies for expectations... i find myself apologizing for expectations... but i also see there was so much more that wasn't said (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2006 5:35:00 PM)


    I hope all works well
    in your soul
    so the infection does
    capture every cell in your
    being
    then, then
    no hope left
    a glimmer now
    the touch possible
    if this poem
    does what its supposed
    to do
    (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2006 5:35:00 PM)


    found this in my guiter case, wrote it about ten years ago............ (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2006 5:34:00 PM)


    Love from a man's point of view, very clearly stated in this force to be reckoned with poem David. I think there is a 'to' in there that should be 'too' Nice work. 9 from Tai (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 8, 2006



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