Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 99,449 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

You Blame Us - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

It was you!
Who broke him into two pieces!
And when he and she came into being,
your magic,
hidden in both the pieces,
you excited them to love,
and when they loved,
you enjoyed it with them,
you put all the blame on passion,
and the two passionate lovers,
and turned out the trio from your gardens,
let me know sweetheart,
why you had closed your eyes?
Leave it.
When your eyes are closed,
let me love once again,
again and again!
Three hundred sixty five into hundred,
Thirty six thousand five hundred times,
Or even more!

Topic(s) of this poem: sin


Comments about You Blame Us by Akhtar Jawad

  • Valsa George (9/17/2015 5:36:00 AM)


    Yes, it was God who cut Adam into two. So it is natural for a man to seek his missing half and for a woman to look for her other half! They cannot but love and love all through! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/8/2015 3:58:00 AM)


    great one! ! ! ! ! ! .10 on 10.............. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/8/2015 12:07:00 AM)


    Love has excited loving nature that is wisely revealed here with wise motive. Amazing sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • (9/7/2015 9:25:00 PM)


    Akhtar jawad can imagine anything, liked this unique poem...........................10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 17, 2015


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