I swore I’d never fall.
But when I look into your eyes
I see your love for me.
I never thought
I’d feel this way again.
But you broke me.
My heart is open
the walls are down.
It used to be dead and quiet
now it beats with sound.
It’s yours for the taking
if you promise not to hurt me.
I swore I’d never feel
this way again.
But you broke me.
You have allowed the reader to feel your heart in these words you have expressed here, thank you for sharing the wonderful piece with us. Scott
heartfelt composition...Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A brilliant composition... Very beautiful way to surrender.. :) i guess i don't know the exact word but really i found it too good. And it's too good 'coz you wrote it with simple words instead of using complicated junks. Keep it up! ! : -)