You Came In My Life(Senryu) Comments

this haiku has got tremendous depth of meaning in it. i must say the use of the twin words did revive instead of revived is a master stroke...it shows the efforts at coming to life is from within and not by any external stimulus...it shows the poem is an positive and affirmative one, and not a nihilist one...it shows the maturity of the poet, , thanks madam for this brilliant piece of poetry....

such unexpected twist... enjoyed!

It is a beautiful poem! You're brilliant well done

:) this piece of write... Is so cute...... I like it... Nicely done

it's very fun and charming! ! that must tell your charactor! ^^