You Can Fly Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

You Can Fly

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You are butter fly
So you can fly
We are human being
We only keep on trying

You have sense to find out honey
We are hungry but only after money
You store for future and bees
We not only take fruits but steal complete tree

See the ants
What do they want?
What do we need?
More and more as greed

See the river water
They flow and cater
All needs and provide
Unite all but never divide

Birds sing in time
We praise sometimes
If that serves the purpose
We keep silence and only suppose

We take no clue
Neglect and refuse to view
We are adamant and irresponsible
Want everything but without struggle

Ants store for future use
We waste it and vehemently refuse
Cut the wood and barren the forest
How can anything then be called best?

Let us not cry later
Still we can make it better
We should miss nothing in anticipation
Let us build future with active participation

* Childish attempt *

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 August 2012

You are butter fly So you can fly We are human being We only keep on trying

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 August 2012

Re: You can fly (Score: 1) by ladymaybebaby on Sunday, August 05,2012 (13: 16: 56) First, anyone that writes to me, should never think of their thoughts and words as a childish or bad attempt. These words come from you and should be respected as such. All writers know that it takes lots of practice and the more you write the better you get. If you want to be a rhyming poet, then you have to focus on not writing your lines to come up with an easy ending word for each line so you can hit an easy rhyme. Like a love/dove or a hate/late. Use a rhyming dictionary for a while until you master it. It will free up your creativity. Keep writing. -LMB xoxo

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2012

?? ? ?? danuta Want everything but without struggle no real

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2012

« Delete » Ganesh Brave.. nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2012

Ñ|†å|-|@GåÜ¢|.. very nicethanks Sir

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2012

Excellent Lorraine Masterson2 hours ago Very well done. Comment +1 love it Jon Otano3 hours ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2012

Jon Otano3 hours ago I really like this poem it touched me! ! ! This man

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2012

Alexander Maldonado3 hours ago Be killing the softly

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2012

Neelabh kumar very nice poem for all of us to save our mother earth and live in harmony Thanks for sharing your views

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2012

Pratap Singh.. Excellent n being a Pilot could understood much better, Nice...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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