'' You Can'T Criticise Me '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' You Can'T Criticise Me ''



My name is Critique as a spirit I’m cold,
Your future is bleak when I have you told,
What I say is true in my own mind,
Though I may slag you off retribution’s unkind.

I am always right though never wrong,
Whatever you recite be it poem or song,
My view is final you’ve no right to reply,
Though I can't do what you do your work I’ll decry.

With monetary persuasion I will administer praise,
On that rare occasion your spirits I’ll raise,
My words can destroy even the best,
That I really enjoy it fills me with zest.

What do I do I hear you all ask,
Give you a review then take you to task,
Comments you dislike your reply I’ll dispel,
At your heart I’ll strike then damn you to Hell.

When I read yours it does make me jealous,
Yes my criticism can be over zealous,
But my views can determine flop or success,
Your masterpiece I can leave in a terrible mess.

I’m the ultimate being so like it or not,
My views are all seeing I will leave you distraught,
You must never forget I’m a sensitive soul,
So don’t make me fret I could lose control.

My words are my bond to my fantasy domain,
I take pleasure in driving all others insane,
What I say about some is an utter disgrace,
But I don’t have the courage to say it to their face.

What you manufacture you love others to enjoy,
But if truth be told I just live to annoy,
Over the years my sheer arrogance has grown,
So before you comment no I can’t write my own.

Seeing all your great work with revenge I’m empowered,
So I’m not just a jerk I am also a coward,
I’ve just one rule in life on which you all must agree,
Though I love causing you strife,

‘’ You Can’t Criticise Me ‘’

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem I wrote to inspire all poets and writers to believe in themselves and to take criticism with a pinch of salt, it takes talent and dedication and an awful lot of effort to write poetry, songs and novels, it takes none to criticise.
Though genuine critique can help you evolve as a writer unjustified criticism can destroy, never give up.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 October 2013

truly said so, bri, and well said.

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