Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Thursday, November 1, 2012

You Don'T Have To Buy My Love Comments

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You don't have to buy my love
Win my heart now it's not tough
You don't have to pay for care
Just become my near and dear
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John Raubenheimer 07 November 2012

Again, playful. I imagine this would stir up romantic feelings in the person it is given to.

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Vian Sabri 04 November 2012

good write, simple nice explain, reach the heart easily....

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Matthias Pantaleon 02 November 2012

Of course love is priceless; so you don't have to buy my love! nice lines! !

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So Close 01 November 2012

The poem was good and well write....keep it up »so close«

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Jahan Zeb 01 November 2012

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm easy way to please a person who loves you the most.... But what the other person will find these easy things very difficult in such a situation. I love the way the poem is written. The requests or pleadings could be more powerful though. Nice work.

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Erica Borges 01 November 2012

I'm comparing this to Alone. All one. I'm comparing this to The opposite of love is not hate, it's selfishness. Polish that soul a bit Mr. Asif.

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Shivani Misra 01 November 2012

Nice one.. Thanks for sharing..

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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