You & I Poem by Nivedita Patnaik

You & I

Rating: 4.5


Lives apart we stay together...
opinions different we stick around each other..
hardly do we share our thoughts...
seldom do we talk...
rarely do we titter and giggle...
once in a blue moon we experience ecstatic-joy...
mundane life keeps us busy...
time tickles away...
lapse of soulful-unison recurs...
love lost or spasms of agony accumulated? ? ?
the void enlarges to fill me with nothingness..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Patnaik 23 October 2013

Thanks Abhishek...for the response

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Abhishek Tiwari 23 October 2013

The fouth dimension is really difficult to keep at hand and that encroaches the other three dimensions... The nothingness created by times reciprocates itself into the distance.... waht a wonderful depiction of the situation... nice work...: -)

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Khairul Ahsan 22 October 2013

Feelings of void beautifully depicted.

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