Alice Perfect


You Messed It Up Bad, It Was Sooo Cute! - Poem by Alice Perfect

for all you did
I appreciate YOU
you diligently tried
to get things just right
I noticed all the ways
you attempted and re-attempted
wow, you were trying to please me
could I ever be so blind
as to not see your care and effort?

But let's call a spade a spade
and look at the hand you played
and the huge mess you made
you really screwed this up
and I love you for that pup,
you are soooo cute!

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about You Messed It Up Bad, It Was Sooo Cute! by Alice Perfect

  • Daniel Brick (11/15/2015 8:21:00 AM)


    You identified love as the topic, and it's a curious, quirky, utterly infectious kind of love being celebrated.
    You don't narrate any specific scene or activity so I can't comment or appraise the nature of your response.
    But what I like is your sleight of hand in both informing someone they have failed (always a thankless job)
    and encouraging them to keep trying. The lightness of touch you display in both the negative and positive comments is perfectly pitched.
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 10:26:00 PM)


    Superb, And I love u for that pup.....So well thought.10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015



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