Frozen Beauty

Rookie (April 6th / Minnesota)

[you'Re Nothing] - Poem by Frozen Beauty

resisting my roots,
ignoring my flaws;
who are you to be
invading my thoughts.

revealing my secrets,
increasing my fears;
who are you to be
touching my ears.

watching my habbits,
intruding my space;
who are you to be
kissing my face.

reversing my words,
holding my knife;
who are you to be
threatening my life.

perversing my mind,
creating my hate;
who are you to be
screaming my name.

scarring my insides,
haunting my dreams;
who are you to be
nothing it seems.

(09/15/07)


Comments about [you'Re Nothing] by Frozen Beauty

  • (1/23/2008 6:39:00 PM)

    Intriguing, each stanza almost has its own meaning, but they build together to something sinister and raise the question of who, what, or is it the person's own doubts and fears, I will probably need to return to this poem to gain more insight as I ponder it's words. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2007 8:39:00 PM)

    This to me seems as if someone had said something to you and the response was 'Who do you think you are'? but thats just the way I interpit it. It also has a second meaning to me, 'that words are just words.' They invaded you mind, they get into your dreams and they can be hurtful, like a slap in the face.
    Very intresting read and very well composed. I guess the real meaning is interpided by each reader. Very well done.
    'Keep on inking the Pages'
    Poison
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 3, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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