Abhinav Baruah

Rookie - 29 Points (January 31 / Jorhat)

You Said It - Poem by Abhinav Baruah

You said it louder than words
Much louder than thunder storm
Of love and dedication
Of unbroken promises
Falling leaves rose again in rhythm of winds
And dead souls found a refuge somewhere at horizon

You said it
Smoke of revolution broke the chain
Caged bird sang the song of open door
Poor man knocked the heavens’ door
And distant blue mountain paved the way for green fields

And you leap yourself in the torrents of pretence


Comments about You Said It by Abhinav Baruah

  • (4/9/2010 8:33:00 AM)

    beautifully worded, very intense, loved the use of imagery.

    thank you
    Michael
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  • (3/9/2010 10:56:00 AM)

    And you leap yourself in the torrents of pretence...
    Excellent ending... liked your this piece of work :)
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  • (3/7/2010 11:19:00 AM)

    you said it and I loved it (Report)Reply

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  • (3/3/2010 8:42:00 PM)

    this is so profound..i liked it a lot, thank you (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2010 8:12:00 PM)

    You said it louder than words
    Much louder than thunder storm
    Of love and dedication
    Of unbroken promises....so far if remained true to spirit....lovely words n fine one...10

    read mine...words has got....i miss
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  • (3/2/2010 12:42:00 PM)

    Excellent finish…a twist …polarized…and a savor of poets…
    Thanks for contributing
    Thanks
    10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 22, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 9, 2010


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