You said it louder than words
Much louder than thunder storm
Of love and dedication
Of unbroken promises
Falling leaves rose again in rhythm of winds
And dead souls found a refuge somewhere at horizon
You said it
Smoke of revolution broke the chain
Caged bird sang the song of open door
Poor man knocked the heavens’ door
And distant blue mountain paved the way for green fields
And you leap yourself in the torrents of pretence
beautifully worded, very intense, loved the use of imagery. thank you Michael
And you leap yourself in the torrents of pretence... Excellent ending... liked your this piece of work :)
You said it louder than words Much louder than thunder storm Of love and dedication Of unbroken promises....so far if remained true to spirit....lovely words n fine one...10 read mine...words has got....i miss
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I would like to translate this poem
Excellent finish…a twist …polarized…and a savor of poets… Thanks for contributing Thanks 10 Ms. Nivedita UK