You said you'd always love me,
That my brilliance lights up the sky.
You said you just can't stop looking,
To the beauty in my eye.
You say it doesn't matter,
If I agree or not.
Your loving words consume me
And I know you have a plot.
You say it doesn't matter,
If I know your plan at all
You'll still trick me into loving you
That eventually to you I'll crawl..
You say you haven't noticed,
How you seem to have me swirled.
You try so hard to fit me,
In your perfect little world.
Though you thoroughly have lost me
And I haven't got a clue.
I know that though I do not fit,
I'm now in love with you.
I gave you a 9 on this one because I thought it was written better.The rhymes were very nice and added a lot to the reading of the piece.I really had a good time reading it. GW62
This poem is amazing. Those type of relationships are hard and I can see the emotion in which you write with. Very good read...
You show really conflicting emotions in this poem.Love is strange that way.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a lovely write..rhymes nicely.. nice to read...A10... Ency Bearis