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The way you make me feel is sad.
You took my world and put it upside down.

You took my body and made it want more.
The places where we have been, now it is hard to go back there without you.

You made me look like a real man, and now i am just a guy without a soul.
you took my soul and made me want to die.

You took my heart, and you just put it on the self, and forgot all about it.

Iron Panda 23™ 03 March 2010

i likes it...even if it is sad^-^

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Sarah Reamey 03 December 2009

This poem is sad, but VERY good. Im sure many people can relate to it, Including myself. minus the guy part lol, but yeah its very good! :)

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Omar Ibrahim 24 November 2009

this contains many metaphors.good job ;)

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Eyan Desir 17 November 2009

awww.. you will get someone ok.. don't kill your self please

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