Jake Deeds

Rookie - 323 Points (5/11/1965 / Arkansas)

Young Love - Poem by Jake Deeds

Deep inside a silent slumber
Out and beneath the uncut lumber
The ebb and flow of a divine breeze
While lying on a bed of leaves
Within a dream a dream conceives

The conception but of reveries
With cloudless skies and windless seas
Where Spring and Fall are melodies
And slathered stars in sky outnumber
The painted leaves in hue of umber

Hearts raptured in silence swoon
Ruby red lips on a blushing blood moon
Slowly slinking between leaves and seam
To taste the cream atop the cream
And voyage beyond the realm of dream

Wandering eyes reduced to a gleam
Balmy palms are gaining steam
Young love, young love, you reign supreme
Trail with me long reminiscence of June
Beneath the canopy and cotton strewn <><

Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams


Comments about Young Love by Jake Deeds

  • Jazib Kamalvi (7/20/2017 4:06:00 AM)


    A nice poetic imagination, Deeds. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/20/2017 9:03:00 PM)


    Wandering eyes reduced to a gleam
    Balmy palms are gaining steam
    Young love, young love, you reign supreme. a mysterious experience....... that is love...... your word coining that let you express yourself in wonderful images..... just superb indeed. tony
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 12, 2016



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