Monday, July 28, 2014

Young Wife's Longing Comments

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Waking up with dawn, usual early
Realize our twin-bed's half empty
My sunshine absent, next to me
Rude dawning: you're across seas
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Paul Sebastian
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Charity Nduhiu 02 September 2015

Paul, you make me long for that love, its seems so real yet painful. Wonderful poem

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Valsa George 28 July 2014

When the dear one is away, especially in the initial years of marriage, it is so very natural. A wife or husband feels so lonely without the other. That is the charm of man- woman relationship! But as years pass by, the same woman may enjoy better a few days without him! That is again the untold reality of married life! Enjoyed your poem!

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