Your Amusement Park Poem by Liza Sud

Your Amusement Park

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For me you mean more than all prizes,
you walk along, go smiling,
you will not give me much money,
More important is how you humble.

As children on carousel -
they are loving the high flight,
dependence on whirling race.
Ten minutes - and their delight.

And since your amusement park
for me is completely free -
what else do I have to ask? -
this debt I vannot redeem.




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Для меня ты важнее премий,
идешь себе, улыбаешься,
ты не выдашь мне много денег,
Важнее - как ты издеваешься.

Как дети на Карусели -
любят высокий полет,
зависимость от кружений.
Десять минут - и восторг.

А поскольку твой парк развлеченй
для меня совершенно бесплатный -
что еще от тебя мне требовать? -
я и так в долгу неоплатном.

Monday, June 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: debt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 27 June 2016

It sounds like a message of a profound meaning to a family with attachments. Quite sensational poem. Thanks for sharing. X

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2016

This means more than all prizes. This is very amazing poem shared definitely. Interesting poem on debt topic...10

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