Your beauty is what holds my eye,
so hard to look away.
I am caught by the surprise,
of nothing more to say.
Short of breath and chilled of flesh,
I dropp to bended knee.
And promise all the world to you,
with love so tenderly.
I find so hard some words to speak,
my joy I cant conceal.
Votre beaut'e est ce qui tient non oiel...
Your beauty is what holds my eye...
Short of breath and chilled of flesh, I dropp to bended knee. thats so cute bud. I love it. good job. Becca
Beauty holds your eye so perfectly here SC! Love it, so romantic, the truth beams from your pen...smiling at you, Tai
so sweet, so honest, so perfectly said....who's spirit entered you my friend...let them stay a while...I love it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
such a romantic composition here. The beauty in and out so enchanting for the beholder...a 10.