Thursday, June 12, 2008

Your Choice Story Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

My cause was just I could fulfil
a life long dream, an urge to kill.
An urge I knew I must resist
by application of my will.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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James B. Earley 18 August 2008

Thanks for your efforts...my friend...but..you have..so..much work...yet...undone! Now....on with your chores......

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Bob Blackwell 21 June 2008

Ivor, you have painted quite a tale and a disturbing one at that. Unfortunately paedophillia is like a rolling stone were evil begats more evil, when victims also become paedophiles....and so on. What you wrote needed saying as long as brings on healthy debate. Your friend Bob

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Ernestine Northover 12 June 2008

Well woven Ivor, I've a feeling it is untrue but just the same a very good storyline and well 'executed'! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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