Asif Andalib

Bronze Star - 2,391 Points (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

Your Dirty Game - Poem by Asif Andalib

My mind has exploded like big bang
Cause you prefer your criminal gang!

They raped you now you love them
Thus you play your dirty game!

I preferred you to all other girls
But you don’t know about the real pearls!

It seems you have gone astray
So you won’t step on my way!

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  • To Windward (10/9/2011 8:02:00 AM)

    A poem tinged with distaste, jealousy and perhaps regret. Do you think the flow might be helped by more attention to the number of syllables in each line? I think this helps if you are trying to write a poem with rhyming lines.

    For instance;

    My wounded mind exploded with a bang (10 syllables)
    Because you prefer your criminal gang!

    They raped, yet now you show them love, not blame
    So this is how you play your dirty game!

    Hope this helps
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 9, 2011


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