maya crisol

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Your Heart's As Cold As Steel - Poem by maya crisol

I never thought I'd see this day
When I would give up on you
But I've done it all...
i gave my best to you
laid my heart on the floor
got nothing more to prove
So tired of waiting...
you remained unmoved
i've cried a thousand river
bled myself to death
now thoughts of us forever
just caught up its last breath
Cause you can't see
No you just won't feel.....
Your heart's as cold as steel.

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  • (1/13/2007 9:49:00 PM)

    Thank you Ambar, glad you liked it =) (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2007 8:58:00 PM)

    great poem. I can honestly relate to it. Thanks for writing it. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 25, 2010

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