Your Message Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Your Message

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Dear poet and sincere lover
I am your real sympathizer
You are honest and true in feeling
But how come pain with heart bleeding?

I conveyed to her your message
And came back with something on golden page
How does she know about your love and affection?
When none of your words imply with action?

Why should there be tears?
When nothing has been rejected as dear
Why unfounded misgivings and fear?
When you can have all the cheers

You should have all the comforts
When ship is about to land at port
Why dream about unusual tagged?
When life is full of comedy

Have musical ears to melody
That may be difficult to somebody
But if your are real and dedicated
The music is certainly for you and related

Take care of your heart
It is natural gift and consider as divine art
More you take care of it and less you feel pain
As real lovers are not concerned with loss or gain

You express your desire and love in open
Not with childish show or on road all of sudden
But express through eyes and in gentle manner
You will find love nest later or sooner

One side you are praising
And very next you leave the chasing
How can you attain your goal?
When fail to respond with beautiful call

I shall be happy to receive
Your call when you revive
With words and commitment to obligation
As it is question of bond and permanent relation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2012

Colton Hadley7 minutes ago I got lost

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2012

Ayubkhan U6 minutes ago A good poem Comment +1 I don't know

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2012

this one's deep ROSELLA CASELLA5 minutes ago If I understood this, ....sounds like you are loving someone from afar, but they are unaware of it...this one is is deep, but it gets the reader thinking Comment +1 Good poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2012

Dear poet and sincere lover I am your real sympathizer You are honest and true in feeling But how come pain with heart bleeding?

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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