Wednesday, July 29, 2020

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A desire to glow
Once again like a firefly
Pulls me even more
To have this attribute
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Varsha M
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 July 2020

A beautiful poem! The first three lines carry ripples of hopes and aspiration! Appreciated.....10

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Dipak adhya 29 July 2020

All firefly do not surrender to death All firefly do not jump into the firey ringlet The rest After a certain time Make their life A fruitful ones A life is not so dark For the time being it is appeared And there's patience That heals us all intolerance Hope for the sublime sunning All darkness of the night Is not perennial The glowing sun awaits us Where flower blooms in hectic colour!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 July 2020

A well penned poem. Simply splendid.....10++++++++

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