Your Mistake Poem by Kim Hilliker

Your Mistake

Rating: 5.0


Don't preach to me about success as if you knew it all,
Assume you have all answers then soon coming is your fall

It's through mistakes and pain that our lessons are learned,
And condescending attitudes only make the tables turn

No one has the right to judge another's life,
Who can really say what is wrong or right?

It's the purpose of existence to have ups and downs,
A universe fundamental, as funny as it sounds

And, it's irrelevant to me if my lifestyle you approve,
You suffer so much personally when you watch
my every move

Don't waste your precious time worrying about decisions
I may make;
Your life is so much less than perfect because of
That mistake

Sunday, November 4, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: judgement
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 22 January 2020

I LIKE THE FLOW AND RHYMING, but not the message. it sounds like you are not self-assured, OR you are TOO self-assured. bri :)

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Siddartha Montik 28 December 2016

This is exact. So perfectly told as if I heard it in Voice.! ! so True in every inch of letter and so deep! ! LOVED it so much as if I felt I am talking to myself! ! thank you Poet! ! Thank you! ! 10+++++++++++! ! !

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Kim Hilliker

Kim Hilliker

Anaheim, CA
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