Your Not Alone Poem by alondra quinones

Your Not Alone

Rating: 5.0


the pain i cant bare,
it doesn't even matter how hard i try
to keep it inside

all the suffering im going through
all the pain i try to keep from you
your decisions, your path
i don't like whats comming for you

just one little mistake
and he'll be waiting for you

i had a dream yesturday
that you passed away
and i didn't cry
because all the anger slid it by

all the suffering you're going through
don't try to keep it inside
because i can feel it to
i just hate whats comming for you

the path your going is wrong
please let me help you
i don't want you to go
i don't want you to leave me all alone

to see you in pain
it makes me suffer...
to think that today might be
the last time i'll ever see you
i dont want you to die

i dont want to see another friend
go down in the dirt

i know you suffer deeply inside
wishing you could die
seeing no path leading you to live any longer

from all the suffering im going through,
i already lost one friend
don't let me loose you to

the pain you feel, i feel
and i can't bare it any longer
i tried the best i can
to keep it inside
but i can't any longer

i seen you suffer for to long
and you made me do nothing but watch
even though you suffer inside
you tried your best to keep hope alive

but even though you tried
you still wanna die
you just want to leave
this world behind

every tear dropp that i cry each night
is from the pain you have inside
i just cry them for you because
you don't want anyone to know
how you truely feel

so this time, let me help you
give me your hand

we'll to this together
you're not alone anymore
i promise i'll make the suffering go away

i'll lead you until the end
i'll help you all the way
i'll make the pain go away
i'll make you smile again

just give me a chance
i promise i'll succeed...
just give me your hand


10-02-07

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Harris 17 April 2008

loved this peom, be strong and keep writing because it really helps no matter what happens in life.

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Anita Blake 03 October 2007

you truly sound like an amazing friend. great write really powerful.

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Sandy nobody 02 October 2007

you're a good friend alondra, i hope they will accept your help, having a good friend does help make the pain more bearable, its hard to watch someone hurt, and its also hard sometimes to allow others to help, iv been on both sides.good luck

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