Your Picture Poem by Aayush Subedi

Your Picture

Rating: 5.0


Yeah,
It wasn't easy to erase you

Treachery destiny clutched smile

If not,
Why would I howl.

Thursday, October 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 November 2015

Powerfully penned in heightened poetic diction with poignant metaphor, to drive home the poet's conviction. Well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned piece of poetry. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Subedi. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Aayush Subedi 15 October 2015

Thanks Yeah I'll, Liza

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Kelly Kurt 15 October 2015

A short but deep poem, Aayush. Thanks for sharing

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Liza Sudina 15 October 2015

Don't howl - find another picture wih a smile!

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