Your Satisfaction Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Your Satisfaction



Your satisfaction

Yes as writer or poet
Keep head down and cool with quietness
The mind shall always find the way
It shall have enough time to probe and firmly stay

Your originality always speaks
And others, who steal the theme, always seems to be weak
How will they thrive on others idea?
You need not worry and make no such plea

I find common ground
And ultimately found
That fact always remain fact
Your words may present your act

My pen flows in a direction
That is packed with original action
Everything comes as an instant
Presentation with fertile mind and probes at

Your personality shall not be shadowed
And will allow
To probe more in simple presentation
And this should be your satisfaction

Your Satisfaction
Saturday, October 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2017

To probe more in simple presentation And this should be your satisfaction

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2017

YOUR SPACE Poetry Your satisfaction Yes as writer or poet Keep head down and cool with quietness The mind shall always find the way It shall have enough time to probe and firmly stay Your originality always speaks And others, who steal the theme, always seems to be weak How will they thrive on other's idea? You need not worry and make no such plea I find common ground And ultimately found That fact always remain fact Your words may present your act My pen flows in a direction That is packed with original action Everything comes as an instant Presentation with fertile mind and probes at Your personality shall not be shadowed And will allow To probe more in simple presentation And this should be your satisfaction A fine, introspective poem, Hasmukhji, on the need to retain our own unique thoughts and presentation in our poems, and not to copy what others may be writing. Maintaining our individuality should be the focus to grow. GSP Rao,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2017

Hasmukh sir, the genuiness and true qualities of a writer is portrayed well in the poem. The instant flow of words, the originality and the quality of work speaks for themselves without any publicity and hungama. Annapurna Sharma

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