Your Secret Admirer Poem by Callista CharlemagneDaniel

Your Secret Admirer

Rating: 5.0


reduced by a gaze so distinguished yet fill with mystery
connected by the evolutionary tales of romance
seductive in words, demanding every ounce of attention
unwillingly I connect with involuntary visions of heated exchanges
where pure desire spills out, raining, like a hurricane
exploding with lust, with no sense of direction
like electrical impulses her presence is felt
like sweat perfumes drowning my soul and taking possession.
what once was complete turned inefficient with visions
where love at first sight never did justice
for sacrifice of my life is of little consequence
close to her I became forming a friendship of magnitudes
matching happiness and pain of equal proportions
for she would never know the desires that run beneath my soul
fate, a cruel reality for our path will never meet
and like a shadow I remain away from her love
where letters are not delivered and emotions are kept secret
in my dreams I pitch this line
my Juliet for me you stayed, the rib pulled out and transformed
a masterpiece exploding with sophistication
the lyrics to my musical note
but reality sinks in constantly with this note
blank statement
from your secret admirer

Saturday, March 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From the perspective of the admirer who could never be brave enough
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 March 2018

like a shadow I remain away from her love where letters are not delivered and emotions are kept secret in my dreams I pitch this line... fine romantic lines describing your admiration and love for your secret lady love...... thank u dear poet.. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Callista. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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