Your Sweet Surrender Poem by Kuji soliman

Your Sweet Surrender

Rating: 5.0


I feel my hearts beating, faster than the sound

Of your sweet laughter, all around, you and me.

I watch your fingers tremble, against my chest

Your eyes so wide, my hot breath on your flesh.

And I feel I must say, that you look so beautiful

Under the dark skies, so gray.

I love you...I really love you...

I never want this to end, I want this forever.

Tonight I will be your sweet surrender

Just breathe me in

Breathe me in.

I'll never let you go, just so you know.

I love you...I really love you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 22 October 2009

wonderful words.......of great poets....

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Dan Martins 13 October 2009

great job soph loved this one: P Rated 10 / 10 ^_^ keep up the good work

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