Your Thankfulness Gives Me Delight. To D.B. Poem by Liza Sud
Your Thankfulness Gives Me Delight. To D.B.
Your thankfulness gives me delight
and then vice versa.
Imagine God, this constant Light -
boring, but awesome.
And we - divided - may unite,
exchange love-giving,
together asking for the light -
and then receiving.
It is like playing with a ball -
extreme and funny.
And you can never play alone,
this law is stunning.
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Твоя благодарность мне дарит восторг,
а после - наоборот.
Представь постоянный свет - это Бог,
как скучно Ему средь высот!
А мы - разделенное - объединим
в обмене даренья любви,
попросим о свете для нас для двоих
и сможем его получить.
Как это похоже на игры с мячом -
когда экстремально, смешно.
не можешь играть, если ты одинок -
лишь вместе - великий закон!
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4/25/2024 4:03:56 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I remember sending you a comment on this splendid lyric poem, but I can't find it posted. So maybe I only imagined sending you a message, things imagined can seem very real sometimes, as you well know! ! What I wrote - or perhaps just thought - is the poignance of your sentiments in this poem, which I equally embrace. Especially this passage: AND WE DIVIDED MAY UNITE EXCHANGE LOVE-GIVING TOGETHER ASKING FOR THE LIGHT AND THEN RECEIVING. This is so tender and lovely, it conveys all good things with a smile and a hope, and the world turns on its axis and suddenly we tumble into each other's presence. (OK, the last part is wish-fulfillment!)