Your Unconditional Love
By Paul Sebastian
Your heart strains and listens
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That's a superb romantic poem with fine use of the sea metaphor. Enjoyed reading it as it is very poetic. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.
...........Of impatient tides of feelings/Rushing upon your heart's shore...I like these two lines most I would also like to hear your valuable comments about my poem posted here.