Z You Deserve It Poem by David Sabo

Z You Deserve It

Rating: 5.0


In the dark, your shadow cannot follow
In the dark hollow, your soul wallows
In nothingness
The peace that exists,
Betrayed,
By the chaos you insist.

Nothing you believe can save you now,
No way, no how,
You out-played your luck
Now your ******,
NOw your stuck,
In the puddle of c** you sucked
If you served it,
I think you deserve it,
Now wont you tell me,
Was it worth it?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 22 December 2009

David, this is well penned piece, keep it up, you the great potential to prove the entire world who you really are, and you just proved with this poem...keep it up, you definitely are on the right track, God Bless You,10+++Love and Peace...Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year to you and family.....

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